We see....
No two words have driven more readers to Theraflu abuse.
"We see..." tells me to take you less seriously. It's unprofessional, redundant, and may be a tautology - but I haven't looked up that word in a while, so maybe not. The reason is b/c we already see everything you write. If you write
Behind her back she holds a CAPTAIN'S GUN.
we'll see it. Writing 'We see a CAPTAIN'S GUN' only tells us you skipped a page of the screenwriting book/played Bejewled on your phone that day in class.
This is a quick search & destroy fix. You're welcome.
